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Hello sir
Teacher , What season do you like?
Home work
Why do you think about having two seasons only?
My answer
Because I best like to drive on spring and summer like to swim with my friends

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Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework!
In the Philippines, we only have sunny and rainy seasons, so the options are fewer.
Summer is not that bad, but it can really be hot sometimes.

~T. Divina^^

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1. Because I best like to drive on spring and summer like to swim with my friends.
>>I like to drive in spring, and swim with friends in summer.
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