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What do you think about long distance relationships?

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To be honestly, I don't think it's a good thing. There is saying in my country when you're out of your body, you're out of your mind. I strongly agree with it because I have an experience as it. I used to meet her, it took 2 hours and 30 minutes by a train. At the first time, I thought I can take it. But, it's not a reality, I wasn't sure whether my ex-girlfriend loved me or not. And, I started to doubt about her sayings because I can't know about it. So, I respect the couples who do a long distance date between country and country.

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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

To be honestly, I don't think it's a good thing. 
>> To be honest, I don't think it's a good thing. 
OR >> In all honesty, I don't think it's a good thing. 
There is saying in my country when you're out of your body, you're out of your mind. 
>> There is a saying in my country when you're out of your body, you're out of your mind. 
I strongly agree with it because I have an experience as it. 
>> I strongly agree with it because I have an experience as it was
I used to meet her, it took 2 hours and 30 minutes by train. 
>> CORRECT!
At the first time, I thought I can take it. 
>> CORRECT!
But, it's not a reality, I wasn't sure whether my ex-girlfriend loved me or not. 
>> CORRECT!
And, I started to doubt about her sayings because I can't know about it. 
>> And, I started to doubt about what she said because I am not sure about it. 
OR >> >> And, I started to doubt the words she said because I  am not sure about it. 
So, I respect the couples who do a long distance date between country and country.
>> CORRECT!

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