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회원님의 영작문

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do you take into consideration when choosing an accommodation?

There are many to consider when choosing an accommodation.
Among them, the most important thing for me is the location of the accommodation.
Point of view from traveler's, most of them will be for sleeping in the accommodation.
Because of this reason, many people looking for cheap accommodation.
So, they choose accommodation that is far away from their tour place.
However, if the location of the accommodation is bad, I think the trip will be tiring.
And this vacation I experienced, cheap accommodation is cheap for a reason.
Another story is that I got a new information when I booked the accommodation this time.
It's location in the popular city in Japan, but I heard to avoid booking that is cheaper than nearby accommodation.
The reason why, I heard that most of these buildings had bad incidents.
Even, there are website that informs of these buildings.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do you take into consideration when choosing an accommodation?

There are many to consider when choosing an accommodation.
>> There are many things to consider when choosing an accommodation.
Among them, the most important thing for me is the location of the accommodation.
>> CORRECT!
Point of view from traveler's, most of them will be for sleeping in the accommodation.
>> From the point of view of a traveler's, most of them will be for sleeping in the accommodation.
Because of this reason, many people looking for cheap accommodation.
>> Because of this reason, many people look for a cheap accommodation.
So, they choose an accommodation that is far away from their tour place.
>> CORRECT!
However, if the location of the accommodation is bad, I think the trip will be tiring.
>> CORRECT!
And this vacation I experienced, cheap accommodation is cheap for a reason.
>> CORRECT!
Another story is that I got a new information when I booked the accommodation this time.
>> CORRECT!
It's location in the popular city in Japan, but I heard to avoid booking that is cheaper than nearby accommodation.
>> It's located in the popular city of Japan, but I heard that we need to avoid booking in cheaper places than nearby accommodations.
The reason why, I heard that most of these buildings had bad incidents.
>> CORRECT!
Even, there are website that informs of these buildings.
>> There are even websites that inform people about these buildings.
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