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Do you think cultural traditions should be preserved or changed? Why?

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Well, I think the cultural traditions should be preserved. It's because they are the symbol in that country. However, I personally think most people don't want to preserve it. People prefer more modern things than old things. And, some people don't like a redevelopment area about their city. That's why changing cultural traditions is hard in South Korea. Another reason in my country is when people find the cultural heritage. And then, the government will research it. But you know, it takes a very very long time. So, most people don't report it. :)

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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


Well, I think the cultural traditions should be preserved. 
>> CORRECT!
It's because they are the symbol in that country. 
>> CORRECT!
However, I personally think most people don't want to preserve it. 
>> CORRECT!
People prefer more modern things than old things. 
>> CORRECT!
And, some people don't like a redevelopment area about their city. 
>> And, some people don't like a redevelopment in the areas of their city. 
That's why changing cultural traditions is hard in South Korea. 
>> CORRECT!
Another reason in my country is when people find the cultural heritage. 
>> CORRECT!
And then, the government will research it. 
>> And then, the government will do a research about it. 
But you know, it takes a very very long time. 
>> CORRECT!
So, most people don't report it. :)
>> CORRECT!

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