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What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today?

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Sorry, my answer has taken too long.

Please check the attached file.

Happy New Year, Chammy!

We are a year older^^

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Happy New Year, Yun!

Thank you for making the time to still do your homework ^^ 

May this year come in your favor~ More success and goals to achieve :D Have a wonderful holiday season <3

-Chammy

I think it's industrious.

>> I think it's being industrious.

OR

>> I think it's industriousness.

When foreigners see Koreans, what they always say is that Korean are industrious.

If a person is industrious, he or she can easily handle things and become a newcomer who stands out from his or her supervisor.

>>Correct

I also learned industrious from my parents and used that skill to lose weight.

>>  I also learned industriousness from my parents and used it to lose weight.

After my third grade in high school, I set up a regular schedule to lose weight up to 20kg and diligently went out to the gym.

As I went out diligently, I naturally became close to gym members and trainers and helped them exercise.

>>Correct

That's how I lost more that 20kg.

>> That's how I lost more than 20kg.

But that's not the case with the current generation.

Today's generation is a fast-changing world, it's a world that lives well, and it's a world with many options, so it's fast to give up.

I can't say that's not the case here.

So always adults say to MZ generation all the time, "You guys are so quick to give up."

>>Correct

Maybe it's my opinion, but adults won't say that if a person shows industrity.

>>Maybe it's my opinion, but adults won't say that if a person shows industriousness.

The view of the younger generation may change, and furthermore, it may reduce the intensifying conflict between generations, if any.

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