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Q: What do you think about the atmosphere inside the library?
A: I think it's the best atmosphere to study or work.
Usually, it's always silent inside the library, so when people are working, or when they're reading or studying, it would be the best.
But I think some libraries don't have those atmosphere.

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Hi, Paul! 

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think it's the best atmosphere to study or work.
>>CORRECT!

2. Usually, it's always silent inside the library, so when people are working, or when they're reading or studying, it would be the best.
>> Usually, it's silent inside the library so when people are working, reading or studying, it would be the best.

3. But I think some libraries don't have those atmosphere.
>>However, I think some libraries don't have such atmosphere.


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