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Driving

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2024-02-07 757

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Personally, I don't prefer to conclude the men/women differences in specific activities.
In the past time, since the scope of movement was different, there were many differences between men and women.
These days, techs and rules are making differences fade out.
However, in terms of driving, men tend to have skillful sense of direction and speed control because the hunting DNA has been come down.
In fact, accident rate of men is higher than women, so, it’s not easy to suggest certain evidences.

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Hello there, Ms. Yu Jin! I definitely agree with your idea. I believe that instead of comparing gender groups, understanding individual driving skill variations based on diverse factors is a much better approach because each driver possesses unique capabilities and limitations shaped by experience, training, and personal choices. Thank you for doing this homework.
~T. Jenna

Personally, I don't prefer to conclude the men/women differences in specific activities.
>>Personally, I prefer not to draw conclusions about the differences between men and women in specific activities.
In the past time, since the scope of movement was different, there were many differences between men and women.
>>In the past, since the scope of movement was different, there were many differences between men and women.
OR
>> In the past, due to different mobility, there were numerous distinctions between men and women.
These days, techs and rules are making differences fade out.
>>These days, technology and rules are making many differences fade out.
OR
>>These days, new technology advancements and regulations are blurring the lines between many things.
However, in terms of driving, men tend to have skillful sense of direction and speed control because the hunting DNA has been come down.
>>Based on the hunting DNA theory,  men tend to have more skillful sense of direction and speeed control in terms of driving.; however, this lacks scientific basis.
In fact, accident rate of men is higher than women, so, it’s not easy to suggest certain evidences.
>>In fact the accident rate for men is higher than for women, so it's not easy to draw conclusions about inherent driving skill differences between genders.
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