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Tourism seems to have different images depending on people. For me, it's free and relaxing. But sometimes it is walking for several hours and somewhat tiredness. And it's a kind of adventure or challenging myself.

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Tourism seems to have different images depending on people. 
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For me, it's free and relaxing. 
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But sometimes it is walking for several hours and somewhat tiredness.
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 And it's a kind of adventure or challenging myself.
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