무료 레벨테스트 받고 강사평가 남기면 1,OOO원 쿠폰 즉시 적립!

혹시 사이트에선 찾지 못한 궁금한 점이 있으세요?
남겨주신 이메일을 통해 답변 드리겠습니다.

문의하신 내용이 문자로 발송되오니
연락처를 남겨주세요.
업무시간 월~금 오전9시~오후6시
(점심시간 낮12시~오후1시)

영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

What traditional practices in your family do you want to cut off?

작성자: 황*은
2024-02-06 1190

회원님의 영작문

Many Korean people want to cut off the '차례', which is making good food for their ancestors who have passed away because it's hard to make lots of food and it costs a lot although we don't really believe in ancestor ghosts nowadays. But our family are not that stressful about '차례'. In our maternal family, it has been already cut off when my grandfather passed away and my faternal family understands our parents not participating in '차례' because they know we are Christians.
If I have to pick one up, I want to cut off the tradition to visit father's family first. Because of that, my parents, my brother and I hardly meet my father's sister's family. It's so weird.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day again, Seong Eun!
I heard that a lot of young people whether they are not Christians, would like to stop doing the ancestral rites because they are busy. one of my students who is a mom told me that she will be the last person doing this because when she gets old she will not ask her two sons to do ancestral rite for her. Remembering her by visiting her tomb is enough.
Thank you for this!
T. Aki~

Many Korean people want to cut off the '차례', which is making good food for their ancestors who have passed away because it's hard to make lots of food and it costs a lot although we don't really believe in ancestor ghosts nowadays.
>>> Many Korean people want to cut off the 'Ancestral rites, which is making good food for their ancestors who have passed away because it's hard to make lots of food and it costs a lot although we don't believe in ancestor ghosts nowadays.

But our family are not that stressful about '차례'.
>>> But our family is not that stressed about the ancestral rites or Memorial Day ceremony.

In our maternal family, it has been already cut off when my grandfather passed away and my faternal family understands our parents not participating in '차례' because they know we are Christians.
>>> In our maternal family, it has been already cut off when my grandfather passed away and my paternal family understands our parents not participating in '차례' because they know we are Christians.

If I have to pick one up, I want to cut off the tradition to visit father's family first.
>>>  If I have to pick one up, I want to cut off the tradition of visiting my father's family first.

Because of that, my parents, my brother and I hardly meet my father's sister's family. It's so weird.
>>> Because of that, my parents, my brother, and I hardly meet my father's sister's family. It's so weird.

번호 제목 글쓴이 공개 상태 등록일 조회수
135130 Homework 장*혁 완료 2024-02-29 968
135129 Homework 김*서 완료 2024-02-29 2
135128 Homework 권*미 완료 2024-02-29 0
135127 Homework 이*혜 완료 2024-02-29 3
135126 homework 02.29 최*� 완료 2024-02-29 1194
135125 Homework 황*혜 완료 2024-02-29 1265
135124 Homework 권*미 완료 2024-02-29 0
135123 What is the moon like? 최*성 완료 2024-02-29 1555
135122 Do you know about history of computer? 송*우 완료 2024-02-29 1175
135121 The significance of an RSVP? 이*규 완료 2024-02-29 1081
135120 homework 김*현 완료 2024-02-29 1390
135119 What do you think of space traveling? Are you up for it? 오*현 완료 2024-02-29 1364
135118 homework 김*현 완료 2024-02-29 1262
135117 What do you like best about computer games? 김*아 완료 2024-02-29 2392
135116 Homework 류*우 완료 2024-02-29 953
135115 homework 한*영 완료 2024-02-29 1
135114 Homework 윤*선 완료 2024-02-29 783
135113 How often do you call your family and your friends? 박*현 완료 2024-02-29 1097
135112 Talk about a mentor or role model who has had a significant... 이*태 완료 2024-02-29 989
135111 What do you do to de-stress after a demanding day at work? 박*은 완료 2024-02-29 1326

HOW TO USE IT?

[마이페이지 > 수업 내용 보기 > 학습 캘린더 > 영작교정 버튼 클릭]

수업 횟수만큼 영작교정 게시판이 생성되며,
지난 날짜에도 게시 할 수 있습니다.

주5회 수업 : 월 20회 이용 가능
주3회 수업 : 월 12회 이용 가능
주2회 수업 : 월 08회 이용 가능
01
교정 내용은 최대 1,000byte까지 올릴 수 있습니다.

첨부 파일은 원활한 첨삭을 위한 참고자료로 사용될 뿐,
파일에 대한 첨삭은 불가능 합니다.

업로드 가능한 첨부 파일은 최대 2mb까지이며,
첨부 할 수 있는 파일 형식은 다음과 같습니다.

문서 - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
이미지 - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
전문 분야를 제외한 회원님이 직접 작성한 글만
첨삭이 가능하며,

올려주신 글의 강사님 첨삭은 24시간 이내에
완료 되는 것을 원칙으로 하고 있습니다.
03
하루 게시 가능한 글은 3회까지 이며,
종료된 수업의 영작교정 게시판은
이용이 어려운 점 양해 부탁 드립니다.
04

와이즈에듀케이션아이(주) 사이트명: 파워잉글리쉬 대표이사 전상현
사업자등록번호: 217-81-44736 통신판매신고번호: 2014-서울도봉-0233호
서울본사: 서울시 노원구 한글비석로 245 두타빌 B동 7층 713호
대표번호 1688-8672 개인정보관리 책임자: 안희영 [powerenglish@pweng.net]