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Meeting new people is a precious experience. One of the most interesting things about meeting new people is that they don't have high expectations for that person. Through simple conversations with new people, they share their interests and have the same goals.
Everyone has their own experiences, perspectives, and ways of thinking. This can lead to new opportunities, new perspectives, and good relationships.

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You have written your homework well, Mia! Job well done!  Indeed, meeting new people is a precious experience.
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Meeting new people is a precious experience. 

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>> Meeting new people is a wonderful experience.

One of the most interesting things about meeting new people is that they don't have high expectations for that person. 

>> CORRECT

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>> When you meet a new person, you don¡¯t have high expectations.

Through simple conversations with new people, they share their interests and have the same goals.

>> CORRECT

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>> Through simple conversations with new people, we can share our interests and know if we have the same goals.

Everyone has their own experiences, perspectives, and ways of thinking.

>> CORRECT

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>> Everyone has their own experiences, opinions, and views.

This can lead to new opportunities, new perspectives, and good relationships.

>> CORRECT

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>> This can lead to new opportunities, new perspectives, and meaningful relationships.



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