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If you could change one thing about your current house ot make it more comfortable, what would it be

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I have been living in my current house since december 2012 when the house was just constructed.
so my house is very old and especially the floor of living room which was made of wood is worn and doesn't look good.
so first of all I would like to repair the floor.
frankly speacking, in the mean time two daughters who live with me have been asking me to change the floor.
but I have been hesitating to do because of the cost.
so when I get bonus from my company someday, I will do it

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Thank you so much, Sun! 

Home is a place of comfort. It is where we fix our roots and build the foundations of our existence. It is a reference point from where we orient ourselves and the way we behave. Home is our safe place. 

- Kristine ^^ 

I have been living in my current house since december 2012 when the house was just constructed.
>>  My house was built in December of 2012.
so my house is very old and especially the floor of living room which was made of wood is worn and doesn't look good.
>> My house is quite old, and the wood floor in the living room is already worn and not in a good condition.
so first of all I would like to repair the floor.
>> I therefore want to repair the floor first.
frankly speacking, in the mean time two daughters who live with me have been asking me to change the floor.
>> Frankly speaking, my daughters have been asking me to repair the floor.
but I have been hesitating to do because of the cost.
>> However, the cost has been making me hesitate to do it.
so when I get bonus from my company someday, I will do it
>> I'll do that when I receive a bonus from my company eventually.
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