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I want to be pretty

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I want to be pretty among pretty and smart things.
I think being smart is good for creating an environment where I can live more wisely and comfortably in the world, and being pretty is good for creating an environment where I can live in harmony with my surroundings.
I like both, but I want pretty because I think my hair is good enough to live in the world.

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Hi Da Hye, 

It's totally understandable to want to feel pretty and create a positive environment around you. Taking pride in your appearance, like appreciating your hair, is great. Remember, your uniqueness makes you stand out in your own beautiful way. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I want to be pretty among pretty and smart things. 

>>I aspire to be both attractive and intelligent among beautiful and smart things. 

I think being smart is good for creating an environment where I can live more wisely and comfortably in the world, and being pretty is good for creating an environment where I can live in harmony with my surroundings. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Being intelligent is beneficial for establishing a wise and comfortable life in the world while being attractive contributes to creating an environment of harmony with my surroundings. 

I like both, but I want pretty because I think my hair is good enough to live in the world. 

>>I appreciate both qualities, but I prefer attractiveness because I believe my hair is sufficient to navigate through the world. 

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