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I agree Sharonzs opinion. Beacause human have learned many science knowledge from natural. They researched science in the Earth. But science and technology have developed highly. We can go out to space and we can discover a lot of knowledges.

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Hello, Henry!
I appreciate your perspective, and you've highlighted the significant advancements in science and technology. It's true that we've learned a great deal from studying the Earth, and our ability to explore space has opened up new opportunities for discovery. Keep up the thoughtful insights!
~ Teacher Maxine

I agree Sharonzs opinion. Beacause human have learned many science knowledge from natural. 
>> I agree with Sharon's opinion because humans have gained much scientific knowledge from nature.

They researched science in the Earth. 
>> They have conducted research on science on Earth. 

But science and technology have developed highly.
>> Moreover, science and technology have advanced significantly. 

We can go out to space and we can discover a lot of knowledges.
>> We can now explore space and discover a wealth of knowledge.
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