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I have been living in Suwon city since December 2012 where My company is located at. so I have been living here for over 11 years.
Suwon city is an hour south of Seoul city, the capital of South Korea and has 1,300,000 populations.
The city is also the provincial capital of Gyeonggi province, the largest local government in South Korea.
The Gyeonggi province government established a local public corporation where I am working for.

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I have been living in Suwon city since December 2012 where My company is located at. 
>> I have been living in Suwon City since December 2012, where my company is located.
so I have been living here for over 11 years.
>> Correct.
Or >> I've been residing here for more than 11 years.
Suwon city is an hour south of Seoul city, the capital of South Korea and has 1,300,000 populations.
>> Suwon City is an hour south of Seoul City, the capital of South Korea, and has 1,300,000 residents.
The city is also the provincial capital of Gyeonggi province, the largest local government in South Korea.
>> Correct.
The Gyeonggi province government established a local public corporation where I am working for.
>> The local public corporation I work for was founded by the government of Gyeonggi province.

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