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What does a holiday mean to you?

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1. Big holidays like new year or thanks giving day, etc...
big holidays are a day what we have to delicious or traditional food with relatives we don't often see.
Or big holidays are very long holidays to company employee, so they can going to overseas trip.
But, disadvantage is many people stay in one place or rest in holidays and many traffic jam in road,
and there are actually many shops that don't do business.

2. small holidays like day off
Kind of people can be diffrent, but I have a day off. I worked on sat, sun, mon, tue and I rest on thu, fri.
On small holidays, I've decided to make them days for doing things I haven't been able to do.
For example preparing working holiday, meeting friends,
If not, just spend my day with watching youtube in home and organize my diary.

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Thank you for this Eunice!

1. Big holidays like new year or thanks giving day, etc...
big holidays are a day what we have to delicious or traditional food with relatives we don't often see.
>>> Big holidays are days we have delicious or traditional food with relatives we don't often see.
Or big holidays are very long holidays to company employee, so they can going to overseas trip.
>>> Or big holidays are very long holidays for company employees, so they can go to overseas trip.
But, disadvantage is many people stay in one place or rest in holidays and many traffic jam in road, and there are actually many shops that don't do business.
>>> But, the disadvantage is many people stay in one place or rest in holidays and there's heavy traffic jams on the road, and there are actually many shops that don't open their business on that day.
2. small holidays like day off
Kind of people can be diffrent, but I have a day off.
>>> There are different kinds of people, but I do have a day off.
 I worked on sat, sun, mon, tue and I rest on thu, fri.
>>>  I work on Sat, Sun, Mon,  and Tue then I rest on Thu and Fri.
On small holidays, I've decided to make them days for doing things I haven't been able to do.
>>> correct
For example preparing working holiday, meeting friends,
>>> For example, preparing for the working holiday and meeting friends.
If not, just spend my day with watching youtube in home and organize my diary.
>>> If not, I just spend my day with watching Youtube at home and organizing my diary. 
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