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Adults should teach young people a lesson that alcohol and tobacco are dangerous because young people can't realize it on their own.

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I completely agree with you, Eric.  Parents should be responsible for guiding their children to the right path, and that involves teaching them about the risks that come with alcohol and tobacco. Thank you for answering your homework, and I hope you enjoy your weekend with your family! 
~T.Harmony <3

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