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What makes a drama/movie interesting for you?

Defferent of the Movie and the drama are longth of story and time.
The Drama has long time and long story And the movie has short time and short story.
But both is same. The drama and the movie gave me deeply moving.
The drama and the movie gave to interest for me. For example, interst through various characters, various imagination, we can see many place in the Earth. Feel through various incident.

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Defferent of the Movie and the drama are longth of story and time.
>>> The difference between a movie and a drama is length of story and time.  
The Drama has long time and long story And the movie has short time and short story.
>>>  The drama sir for a long time and has a long story and the movie has short time and short story.  
But both is same. 
>>>  But both are the same. 
The drama and the movie gave me deeply moving.
>>> The drama and the movie both moves me.
The drama and the movie gave to interest for me. 
>>> The drama and movies are interesting to me. 
For example, interst through various characters, various imagination, we can see many place in the Earth. 
>>> For example, interest through various characters, various imagination, we can see many places on Earth.   
Feel through various incident.
>>> We can fell different things through various incidents. 
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