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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree

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I almost forgot that I have to do my homework.
During my day off, I enjoyed reading 3 books. I didn't have any time when I prepare the hotel management certificate however I really feel
free to enjoy my hobbies such as drawing logos, stocks these days.


Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree?
I definately agree to learn about the past.
We have to know the history to live for now and the future.
For example, Korea has been attacked by neighboring countries such as Japan and Chinese and even North Korea.
Whenever we were attacked, we had no strong military power so asked help to rescue our country.
In light of the history, we must have strong military power to save ourselves.
If we are not interested in the history and prepare nothing, I am sure same things happened again someday.
So I think learning about the past has high value for the present.

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Well said, Han!
I appreciate how Koreans value learning about history. It was genuinely impressive to hear other elementary students express awareness of what happened in the past. And your answer tells about the necessity of keeping yourself informed about it.
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I almost forgot that I have to do my homework.
During my day off, I enjoyed reading 3 books. I didn't have any time when I prepare the hotel management certificate however I really feel
free to enjoy my hobbies such as drawing logos, and stocks these days.
>>Correct
I definately agree to learn about the past.
>>I definitely agree to learn about the past.
We have to know the history to live for now and the future.
For example, Korea has been attacked by neighboring countries such as Japan and Chinese and even North Korea.
>> For example, Korea has been attacked by neighboring countries such as Japan, China, and even North Korea.
Whenever we were attacked, we had no strong military power so asked help to rescue our country.
>>Whenever we were attacked, we had no strong military power so we asked for help to rescue our country.
In light of the history, we must have strong military power to save ourselves.
>>In light of history, we must have strong military power to save ourselves.
If we are not interested in the history and prepare nothing, I am sure same things happened again someday.
>>If we are not interested in history and prepare nothing, I am sure the same things will happen again someday.
So I think learning about the past has high value for the present.
>>Correct
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