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Why are the computers important?

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Because If we doesn't have the computers or laptop,
We can't study, we can't do Power English, we can't play games many things we can't do if we doesn't have a computer or a laptop.
And also we can't watch movie and surf for a internet.
That's why computers and laptops are impertant.
These are the reasons why the computers and laptops are important.

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Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille


Because If we doesn't have the computers or laptop,
We can't study, we can't do Power English, we can't play games many things we can't do if we doesn't have a computer or a laptop.
>> It is important because if we don't have a computer or a laptop, we can't study, we can't do Power English classes, we can't play games, and many more. There are many things we can't do if we don't have a computer or a laptop.
And also we can't watch movie and surf for a internet.
>> We also can't watch movies or surf the internet.
That's why computers and laptops are impertant.
>> That's why computers and laptops are important.
These are the reasons why the computers and laptops are important.
>> CORRECT!

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