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Which one do you prefer iPhone or Samsung and why?

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I prefer Samsung to iPhone. Most of all, Samsung is my country Korea brand that I love. Secondly, I know a Samsung phone has very fantastic durability when it dropped from 20th floor it works. Besides, believe or not, even if it is ground in the blender it can maintain its own shape. Lastly, It has a Samsung Pay that we can pay by this anywhere. I can¡¯t use something like this since I¡¯m still young but I think Samsung galaxy is awesome and I proud of Korea having Samsung.

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Hi Scott!

Happy Monday!

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I prefer Samsung to iPhone. Most of all, Samsung is my country Korea brand that I love. Secondly, I know a Samsung phone has very fantastic durability when it dropped from 20th floor it works. Besides, believe or not, even if it is ground in the blender it can maintain its own shape. Lastly, It has a Samsung Pay that we can pay by this anywhere. I can¡¯t use something like this since I¡¯m still young but I think Samsung galaxy is awesome and I proud of Korea having Samsung.

>> I prefer Samsung than iPhone. Most of all, Samsung is a Korean brand that I love. Secondly, I have seen a Samsung A that was dropped on the 20th floor and it was still working. Besides, believe or not, even if it is put on the blender, it can maintain its original shape. Lastly, It has a Samsung Pay that we can pay anywhere. I can¡¯t use something like this since I¡¯m still young but I think Samsung galaxy is awesome and I'm proud of my country Korea having Samsung as our company.

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