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Q: What happens when we consume too much milk?
A: I'm not sure because I've never consumed milk too much, but I think it won't be good at health.
As I heard, drinking milk too much causes troubles of digesting or in the guts, and for most of foods, consuming too much is not good.
Also, since there are calcium in milk, consuming too much also makes problems at the bones.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some points to consider:

1. I'm not sure because I've never consumed milk too much, but I think it won't be good at health.
>>I'm not sure because I've never consumed too much milk, but I think it won't be good for the health.

2. As I heard, drinking milk too much causes troubles of digesting or in the guts, and for most of foods, consuming too much is not good.
>>As I heard, drinking too much milk causes troubles in digestion or in the guts, and for most of foods, consuming too much is not good.

3. Also, since there are calcium in milk, consuming too much also makes problems at the bones.
>>Also, since there is calcium in milk, consuming too much makes problems with the bones.

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