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What does a happy life look like for you?
A Happy life is very important for me. and
I always want to get a happy life with my family.
and I'm always trying of it.
A Happy life has many thinks and meanings.
For example,
to drink and to smell of coffee, talk a walk with my wife,to talk about our life, have a delicious
Food, drowing and painting, thinking about new idea, look at fun movie, listen to the beautiful music, meditation, talking about us with my fimily.

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Thank you for this Sir Ko. Life is indeed filled with many happy things, simple things that are priceless.


A Happy life is very imp.ortant for me. and I always want to get a happy life with my family. and I'm always trying of it.
>>>  A happy life is very important for me and I always want to get a happy life with my family so I'm always trying for it.
A Happy life has many thinks and meanings.
>>>  A happy life has many thoughts and meanings.
For example, to drink and to smell of coffee, talk a walk with my wife,to talk about our life, have a delicious Food, drowing and painting, thinking about new idea, look at fun movie, listen to the beautiful music, meditation, talking about us with my fimily
>>>  For example, to drink and to smell coffee, taking a walk with my wife to talk about our life, having delicious food, drawing and painting, thinking about new ideas, watching fun movies, listening to the beautiful music, meditation, talking with my family, etc.
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