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What do you think of trying something new that is out of your preference and interest?

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Good morning Chammy.
It is Monday and my day ^^
It wasn't busy last weekend compared to other weekend.
So I was able to study the stock secretly during the work schedule.
Despite lacks of sleep, I am happy I can enjoy it.
You must be busy today, however I hope you have a good time.

What do you think of trying something new that is out of your preference and interest?
I like to try something new but if it is out of my interest, I would try it first.
It might be out of my interest at the first time but it would be getting more enjoyable some day.
Nobody knows it is definitely out of my preference before I try.
My general manager asked me to raise sales in our restaurant. So I decided to start TikTok and get permission from him.
I am not interested in managing social network form but I will try.

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It is a happy Monday for you, Han!
It was nice to know that you have been doing satisfying things the past few days... Also, trying something new is actually good, so I must agree!~ It allows us to discover more things about ourselves. Furthermore, good luck as you enter the world of TikTok...for business hihihi ^_^
-Chammy
Good morning Chammy.
It is Monday and my day ^^
>>Correct
It wasn't busy last weekend compared to other weekend.
>> It wasn't busy last weekend compared to other weekends.
So I was able to study the stock secretly during the work schedule.
>>Correct
Despite lacks of sleep, I am happy I can enjoy it.
>>Despite lack of sleep, I am happy I can enjoy it.
You must be busy today, however, I hope you have a good time.
What do you think of trying something new that is out of your preference and interest?
I like to try something new but if it is out of my interest, I would try it first.
It might be out of my interest at the first time but it would be getting more enjoyable some day.
Nobody knows it is definitely out of my preference before I try.
My general manager asked me to raise sales in our restaurant. So I decided to start TikTok and get permission from him.
I am not interested in managing social network forms but I will try.
>>Correct
OR
>> I enjoy trying new things, but if it is not something I am interested in, I will try it first.
It may have seemed uninteresting at first, but it would become more enjoyable over time.
Nobody knows it's definitely not my kind of thing until I try.
My general manager requested me to boost our restaurant's sales. So I decided to create a TikTok account and ask for his approval.
I'm not interested in maintaining social network forms, but I want to give it a try.
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