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Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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I agree that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need.
This is an actual case, my family went to the mart because we thought we could buy things at a low price after looking at the flyer for a big sale, and we bought extra items that we didn\'t need and came home.
Like this, I think most advertisements are aimed at getting people to buy things.

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Hello, Yun!
Advertisements claiming reduced costs are quite appealing, but occasionally they're deceiving since the difference between the original and discounted prices isn't really much. And I agree, we've had plenty of experience buying goods we didn't need just because they were on sale HAHAHA.
-Chammy
I agree that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need.
This is an actual case, my family went to the mart because we thought we could buy things at a low price after looking at the flyer for a big sale, and we bought extra items that we didn't need and came home.
Like this, I think most advertisements are aimed at getting people to buy things.
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