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What are the career opportunities in urban areas? There are lots of things to do in urban areas. But, there are not many jobs in rural areas. Most people work as farmer.

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Hi, Justin. Thank you so much for taking your time to do your homework. I appreciate it so much. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia  
There are lots of things to do in urban areas. But, there are not many jobs in rural areas.
>> There are lots of things to do in urban areas, but there aren't as many jobs in rural areas. 
Most people work as farmer.
>> Correct
OR >> Most people work as farmers.
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