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Do you agree that pictures are meant for capturing good memories?

We are liveing to think good memories.
Good memories always gave me all of it.
We always felt something.when, we saw pictures. many Pictures imporfant in our life.
We can feel our life through various pictures.
Many pictures is equal our memory.
We always took our pitures for our living.
Pictures is the part in my life.

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Thank you for this Sir Ko!

We are liveing to think good memories.
>>> We are living to think of good memories. 
Good memories always gave me all of it.
>>> correct  
We always felt something.when, we saw pictures. 
>>> We have always felt something when we saw pictures.  
many Pictures imporfant in our life.
>>>  Many pictures are important in our lives.
We can feel our life through various pictures.
>>> correct 
Many pictures is equal our memory.
>>>  Many pictures are equal to our memory.
We a
lways took our pitures for our living.
>>>  We always take our pictures as we are living.
Pictures is the part in my life.
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