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What do you think are the pros and cons of international marriage (marrying a person from another co

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Well, I think it's only the pros of international marriage that found the true love with each other. Some people can feel hard to find their fiance in their life. However, there are a lot of cons. For the different culture, an argument will happen. Then, they could be divorced. Also, it's pretty hard to meet each parents because of the different country. And, each parents don't allow them to get international marriage. If I found foreigner who has a blonde hair and I really loved, I can overcome those things. :)

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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


Well, I think it's only the pros of international marriage that found the true love with each other. 
>> Well, I think the only pros of international marriage is finding true love with each other. 
Some people can feel hard to find their fiance in their life. 
>> Some people can feel that it's hard to find their fiance in their life. 
However, there are a lot of cons.
>> CORRECT!
 For the different culture, an argument will happen. 
>> CORRECT!
Then, they could be divorced. 
>> CORRECT!
Also, it's pretty hard to meet each parents because of the different country. 
>> Also, it's pretty hard to meet each other's parents because of their country's difference. 
And, each parents don't allow them to get international marriage. 
>> CORRECT!
If I found foreigner who has a blonde hair and I really loved, I can overcome those things. :)
>> CORRECT!

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