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I agree with that statement. We can use our smartphone anywhere. For example, during the meal or take public transportation, it is common to watch YouTube or OTT service instead of talking to people. Also there's a lot of noise canceling products too. Even we can order everything in online and it is delivered to next day, we don't need to go shop clothes, grocery and products.

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I agree with that statement. 
>>Correct
We can use our smartphone anywhere. 
>>We can use our smartphones anywhere. 
For example, during the meal or take public transportation, it is common to watch YouTube or OTT service instead of talking to people. 
>>For example, during a meal or taking public transportation, it is common to watch YouTube or OTT service instead of talking to people. 
Also there's a lot of noise canceling products too. 
>> Also there are a lot of noise-canceling products too. 
Even we can order everything in online and it is delivered to next day, we don't need to go shop clothes, grocery and products.
>>Even if we can order everything online and it is delivered to next day, we don't need to go shopping for clothes, groceries, and products.
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