¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

home work

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÃÖ*¼Ø
2024-01-24 338

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

emm....
When I get angrry I hug my inormous bear and try to smile and sing and listen to music play list
with song called \\\'blessing\\\", \\\"connecting\\\", \\\"smilling\\\" and \\\"paintter\\\" this songs will make me calmdown.
And I don\\\'t useally get angry that much, even thongh I got angry whille fighting with my friend.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello my great student Onew!
Wow! You're consistently making your homework now haha. Thank you for the time and effort! I always knew you were a calm person. But I think you're the kind of person who is scary when they seriously get angry haha. They should be careful. Anyway, I'm looking forward to talk to you tomorrow. See you! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

When I get angrry I hug my inormous bear and try to smile and sing and listen to music play list
>>When I get angry, I hug my enormous bear and try to smile, sing, and listen to music playlists.
with song called \\\'blessing\\\", \\\"connecting\\\", \\\"smilling\\\" and \\\"paintter\\\" this songs will make me calmdown.
>>Songs that are related to keywords such as "blessings", "connecting", "smiling", and "painter" calm me down. 
And I don\\\'t useally get angry that much, even thongh I got angry whille fighting with my friend.
>>Besides, I don't usually get angry that much, even though I got angry while fighting with my friend.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
133044 Can you tell me about your favorite movie? À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2023-12-07 0
133043 I don\'t really want to have dual citizenship. À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2023-12-07 586
133042 Robert Tizon said: \"I would rather have eyes that cannot see;... À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2023-12-07 0
133041 Is tipping should be compulsory? Á¤*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-07 602
133040 Do other people\'s bad habits get on your nerves? Which ones? ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-07 1
133039 nomework ±è*¸° ¿Ï·á 2023-12-07 362
133038 The problem of a aging population ±è*´Ô ¿Ï·á 2023-12-07 411
133037 What\'s difference between facilities and amenities in the hotel? Á¤*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-07 590
133036 Can you recall a time when you missed an opportunity by not... ¾ö*ºó ¿Ï·á 2023-12-07 2
133035 What advice would you give to someone who is hesitant about... ¾ö*ºó ¿Ï·á 2023-12-07 1
133034 homwork ¹Ú*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-07 0
133033 What do you want to include in your ideal fitness program? ÃÖ*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-07 337
133032 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-06 331
133031 Homework ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-06 3
133030 Do you get dressed up in party clothes to go to a party? ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2023-12-06 329
133029 homework 12.06 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2023-12-06 402
133028 Habit that bothers me ÀÌ*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2023-12-06 449
133027 What would be your ideal birthday celebration? ¼Û*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-12-06 350
133026 homework ÀÌ*¼÷ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-06 305
133025 Homework ÀÌ*È­ ¿Ï·á 2023-12-06 345

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04