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When I get angrry I hug my inormous bear and try to smile and sing and listen to music play list
with song called \\\'blessing\\\", \\\"connecting\\\", \\\"smilling\\\" and \\\"paintter\\\" this songs will make me calmdown.
And I don\\\'t useally get angry that much, even thongh I got angry whille fighting with my friend.

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Hello my great student Onew!
Wow! You're consistently making your homework now haha. Thank you for the time and effort! I always knew you were a calm person. But I think you're the kind of person who is scary when they seriously get angry haha. They should be careful. Anyway, I'm looking forward to talk to you tomorrow. See you! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

When I get angrry I hug my inormous bear and try to smile and sing and listen to music play list
>>When I get angry, I hug my enormous bear and try to smile, sing, and listen to music playlists.
with song called \\\'blessing\\\", \\\"connecting\\\", \\\"smilling\\\" and \\\"paintter\\\" this songs will make me calmdown.
>>Songs that are related to keywords such as "blessings", "connecting", "smiling", and "painter" calm me down. 
And I don\\\'t useally get angry that much, even thongh I got angry whille fighting with my friend.
>>Besides, I don't usually get angry that much, even though I got angry while fighting with my friend.
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