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I think the most difficult part of English is to express my thoughts in English.
Because most korean schools focus on writting and listening rather than speaking.
It's hard to get a chance to speak with foreigneer who speek English.
And I feel very nervous because it's hard to me to explain my thought in English in a short time

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I hope your classes with us will help you gain confidence in using the English language, Sophie. You can do it! -Faith-
I think the most difficult part of English is to express my thoughts in English. Because most korean schools focus on writting and listening rather than speaking.
>> I think the most difficult part of English is to express my thoughts in English because most Korean schools focus on writing and listening rather than speaking.
OR I think the most difficult part of English is to express my thoughts using the language because most Korean schools focus on writing and listening rather than speaking.
It's hard to get a chance to speak with foreigneer who speek English.
>> It is hard to get a chance to speak with foreigners who speak English.
And I feel very nervous because it's hard to me to explain my thought in English in a short time
>> Also, I feel very nervous because it's hard to explain my thoughts in English in a short time.
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