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회원님의 영작문

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How important is cleanliness to you? Why?

I think it's important to keep our body cleanliness.
Managing cleanliness is a different kind of business(name) card.
If we are not homebody, we will go outside and will meet other people.
And, we will have a social life with other people, like a business and work.
In social life, conversation manners and attitudes are also important, but I think personal cleanliness is also important.
Because, if I am a perfect person, but if my cleanliness is bad, other people will give me worse reviews.
It's not talking about handsome and pretty our appearance.
This means that managing cleanliness is a mutual manner in social life.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How important is cleanliness to you? Why?

I think it's important to keep our body cleanliness.
>> I think it's important to keep our body's cleanliness.
OR >> I think it's important to keep our bodies clean.
Managing cleanliness is a different kind of business(name) card.
>> Managing cleanliness is a different kind of business.
If we are not homebody, we will go outside and will meet other people.
>> If we are not a homebody, we will go outside to meet other people.
And, we will have a social life with other people, like a business and work.
>> And, we need to have a social life with other people, like business and work.
In social life, conversation manners and attitudes are also important, but I think personal cleanliness is also important.
>> In our social life, conversation manners and attitude are also important, but I think personal cleanliness is also important.
OR >> In our social life, conversation manners and attitude are also important, but I think personal cleanliness is important as well.
Because, if I am a perfect person, but if my cleanliness is bad, other people will give me worse reviews.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Because, if I am a perfect person, but if I am unhygienic, other people will think badly of me.
It's not talking about handsome and pretty our appearance.
>> I am not talking about being handsome or about the appearance in general.
This means that managing cleanliness is a mutual manner in social life.
>> This means that managing cleanliness is a mutual manner in improving our social life.

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