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There are homeless people near train or subway station and I heard I should not give them money because once we give them money, they ask for more money. So you shouldn't give homeless people money or you can get some stress.
Second, you should not answer to strange people. Strange people mean fake religion(cult). They may talk to you like 'Can you please do a survey?' or 'Do you know how to go to @@@?' but their real mean is to bring you to their church and get some money. If you keep talk to them and are convinced by them, you and your family's life will become destroyed.
Third, you should not take taxi, or you can lose much time. Many taxis use an taxi appointment app.

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Hello Seong Eun!
Thank you for this. It's great to know things that we should avoid doing when we are in your country.
Have a great day!
T. Aki~

There are homeless people near train or subway station and I heard I should not give them money because once we give them money, they ask for more money.
>>> There are homeless people near train or subway stations and I heard I should not give them money because once we give them money, they ask for more money

So you shouldn't give homeless people money or you can get some stress.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>>So, you shouldn't be giving money to beggars or you might be burdened by them every day.

Second, you should not answer to strange people. Strange people mean fake religion(cult).
>>> Second, you should not entertain strange people because they might be promoting a cult religion.

They may talk to you like 'Can you please do a survey?' or 'Do you know how to go to @@@?' but their real mean is to bring you to their church and get some money.
>>>  They may talk to you like 'Can you please do a survey?' or 'Do you know how to go to @@@?' but their real intention is to bring you to their church and get some money.

If you keep talk to them and are convinced by them, you and your family's life will become destroyed.
>>> If you keep talking to them and are convinced by them, your and your family's lives will be destroyed.

Third, you should not take taxi, or you can lose much time. Many taxis use an taxi appointment app.
>>> Third, you should not take a taxi, or you can lose a lot of time. Many taxis use a taxi appointment app.

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