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How to get my money\'s worth in buffet

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When you will go to buffet, I recommend that you have to eat something before you go.
Some people make a mistake that they're go to buffet in famished condition.
It is because they think that they can eat more when in famished condition.
But it is bad way. Maybe they couldn't eat well than usual.

I recommend eating something before you go to buffet.
I knew this way by internet, one doctor said eating something is more better than going hungry before going to buffet.
It is because the stomach gets shrunk when we eat nothing, so we can't able to eat a lot.

So when someone treat to lunch/dinner in buffet, we have to eat someting even if it's a very small amount!

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It's very creative how you use the words in sentences, Min! ^^ You did a job well done! ^^ 
-Khai
When you will go to buffet, I recommend that you have to eat something before you go.
>> When you go to a buffet, I recommend that you have to eat something before you go.
Some people make a mistake that they're go to buffet in famished condition.
>> Some people make the mistake of going to a buffet in famished condition.
It is because they think that they can eat more when in famished condition.
>> It is because they think that they can eat more in a famished condition.
But it is bad way. 
>> CORRECT
Maybe they couldn't eat well than usual.
>> Maybe they wouldn't be able to eat much more than usual.
I recommend eating something before you go to buffet.
>> I recommend eating something before you go to a buffet.
I knew this way by internet, one doctor said eating something is more better than going hungry before going to buffet.
>> I knew this way from the internet. One doctor said eating something is better than going hungry before going to a buffet.
It is because the stomach gets shrunk when we eat nothing, so we can't able to eat a lot.
>> It is because the stomach gets shrunk when we eat nothing, so we are unable to eat a lot.
So when someone treat to lunch/dinner in buffet, we have to eat someting even if it's a very small amount!

>> So when someone treats us to lunch/dinner at a buffet, we have to eat something, even if it's a very small amount!


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