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How do you describe a good friend? What are the characteristics that made them be considered as good

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I think a good friend makes me comfortable just by being with me even though we don't talk anything. This friends may be someone who i have known for a long time or has similar personality to me.
And also good friend increases my self-esteem when we talk to each other, and
let me know even my mistakes and shortcomings politely.
My best friend is my husband and he always focuses on me whenever we talk. He is trying to empathize with my feelings, sometimes give me helpful advices.

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Hello Jamie,
Thank you for doing your homework today. Have a great day! ^^
~ T. Demi :)

I think a good friend makes me comfortable just by being with me even though we don't talk anything. 

>> I think a good friend makes me comfortable just by being with me even though we don't talk about anything.
This friends may be someone who i have known for a long time or has similar personality to me.
>>This friend maybe someone who I have known for a long time and has a similar personality to me.
And also good friend increases my self-esteem when we talk to each other, and let me know even my mistakes and shortcomings politely.
>> Also, a good friend boosts my self-esteem when we talk to each other and lets me know about my mistakes and shortcomings politely.
My best friend is my husband and he always focuses on me whenever we talk. 
>> CORRECT!
Or>> I consider my husband as my best friend as he always focuses on me whenever we talk.
He is trying to empathize with my feelings, sometimes give me helpful advices.
>> He is trying to empathize with my feelings and sometimes gives me helpful pieces of advice.
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