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Q: What can you do to reduce plastic usage?
A: I can use some other stuffs that I can use for a lot of times.
The main problem of plastic products is people use them once and just throw them away, so they are stacked in the nature.
So if they use things not only once, it might slow down the pollution.

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Hi, Paul! 

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to consider:

1. I can use some other stuffs that I can use for a lot of times.
>>CORRECT!

2. The main problem of plastic products is people use them once and just throw them away, so they are stacked in the nature.
>>The main problem of plastic products is people use them once and just throw them away, so they are stacked in nature.

3. So if they use things not only once, it might slow down the pollution.
>>So, if they use things more than once, it might slow down the pollution.


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