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Do you agree or disagree with the following statemet?

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I agree that parents are the best teachers.
This is because it is the parents who spend the most time from newborn to infancy.
So, I think I can learn good things and bad things from parents.
The example of learning good things is that if you've seen your parents be nice to the elderly since you were young, you can learn to be nice to the elderly.
The example of learning bad things is that if you're a family that commits domestic violence, you can easily encounter domestic violence.
But it can also make you feel like you must not do it based on these things.

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Yun~, you never fail to impress me whenever you write out your thoughts.^^
I always value the effort you put into expressing your responses. I appreciate your time ^_^ Thank you and keep it up! 
-Chammy
I agree that parents are the best teachers.
This is because it is the parents who spend the most time from newborn to infancy.
>>Correct
So, I think I can learn good things and bad things from parents.
>>So, I think I can learn good things and bad things from my parents.
OR
>> Thus, I believe that my parents can teach me both positive and negative things.
The example of learning good things is that if you've seen your parents be nice to the elderly since you were young, you can learn to be nice to the elderly.
>>An example of learning good things is that if you've seen your parents be nice to the elderly since you were young, you can learn to be nice to the elderly.
OR
>> One example of learning positive things from your parents is seeing them treat the elderly with kindness as you grow, which may teach you how to do the same. 
The example of learning bad things is that if you're a family that commits domestic violence, you can easily encounter domestic violence.
>>While an example of learning bad things is when you're in a family that commits domestic violence, you can easily encounter domestic violence.
OR
>>On the other hand, being in a family where domestic violence is practiced is an example of learning bad things.
But it can also make you feel like you must not do it based on these things.
>>Correct
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