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ESSAY: Movies and tv shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Movies and dramas are one of the great ways to study history. But the story is not completely true. We exaggerated a lot to get our attention. There are even some people who don't actually have it.

Watching movies or dramas is a good way to learn history without getting bored. However, you should know that it is clearly wrong to recognize the whole truth of history with it.

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Hi there Lee~!^^ Thanks for doing your homework!  Study while others are sleeping; work while others are loafing; prepare while others are playing; and dream while others are wishing! Keep it up!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Movies and dramas are one of the great ways to study history. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
But the story is not completely true.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 We exaggerated a lot to get our attention.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 There are even some people who don't actually have it.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Watching movies or dramas is a good way to learn history without getting bored.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 However, you should know that it is clearly wrong to recognize the whole truth of history with it.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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