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Q: Are there ways students could enjoy doing homework?
A: If there is a worthy price after solving all the homework, they might enjoy doing homework.
But I think It may not work well because it's not actually making homework entertaining but finishing homework entertaining.
Or, if teachers or parents give student just enough homework, they won't feel tired and that will make it less stressful.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. If there is a worthy price after solving all the homework, they might enjoy doing homework.
>>CORRECT!

2. But I think It may not work well because it's not actually making homework entertaining but finishing homework entertaining.
>>However, I think it may not work well because it's not actually making homework entertaining, but only finishing homework entertaining.

3. Or, if teachers or parents give student just enough homework, they won't feel tired and that will make it less stressful.
>>If only teachers or parents give students enough homework, they won't feel tired and that will make things less stressful.

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