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What rude behaviour do you see in public every day?

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It's not every day. However sometimes, I could see the cutting in for the line. I can understand if someone politely asks me " Excuse me, I'm up to miss something. Could I stand after you?", I will considerate it. On the other hand, I mind considering that. Another one is to smoke in public area. I know why people smoke, it's because I'm a chain smoker. But, I tend to do it in only smoking area. On top of that, the reason why people are smoking to walk in the street. As far as I'm concerned, it's very common thing in South Korea. Nowadays, I live in Australia, it depends on cigarette prices.

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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


It's not every day. 
>> CORRECT!
However sometimes, I could see the cutting in for the line. 
>> However sometimes, I could see people cutting in the line. 
I can understand if someone politely asks me " Excuse me, I'm up to miss something. 
>> I can understand if someone politely asks me " Excuse me, I'm up to something important
Could I stand after you?"
>> CORRECT!
I will considerate it. 
>> I will be considerate. 
OR >> I will consider it. 
On the other hand, I mind considering that. 
>> CORRECT!
Another one is to smoke in public area. 
>> Another one is to smoke in public areas
OR >> Another rude behavior is smoking in public areas.
I know why people smoke, it's because I'm a chain smoker. 
>> CORRECT!
But, I tend to do it in only smoking area. 
>> But, I tend to do it only in the smoking area. 
On top of that, the reason why people are smoking to walk in the street. 
>> On top of that, the reason why people are smoking is because they want to walk on the street while doing it. 
As far as I'm concerned, it's very common thing in South Korea. 
>> As far as I'm concerned, it's a very common thing in South Korea. 
Nowadays, I live in Australia, it depends on cigarette prices.
>> CORRECT!

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