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I think the most common thoughts people have are that they don't want to work and they want to rest.
I don't want to work at any time, and sitting down or overworking my body makes me feel like I haven't rested even if I rest through my health, so I think I'm always tired.

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Hello Da Hye, 

Thank you for doing your homework. Your effort is truly appreciated! It's not easy to balance work and rest, but you're doing great by putting in the effort. Remember, taking small breaks is essential for maintaining a healthy balance. Keep up the good work, and if you have any questions or need further clarification, feel free to ask. You're doing fantastic!  Keep shining! Oh, by the way, your 'I love you' made my day! I really care about you too. ^^

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I think the most common thoughts people have are that they don't want to work and they want to rest. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>The most common thoughts that people often have are a desire to avoid work and a wish to rest. 

I don't want to work at any time, and sitting down or overworking my body makes me feel like I haven't rested even if I rest through my health, so I think I'm always tired. 

>>I don't feel like working at any time, and whether I'm sitting down or pushing my body too hard, it seems like I haven't truly rested even when I take a break for my health. Consequently, I always feel tired. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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