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I think it\'s difficult to increase productivity.

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Monday, which marks the start of work after the weekend, is a day full of lamentations from those who couldn't play more on the weekend.
Originally, the desire to rest becomes more full on Mondays and gives you a feeling of pain for no reason.
So I think it's difficult to increase productivity.

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Hi Da Hye, 

I appreciate your perspective on Mondays. It's understandable that the transition from the weekend can be challenging, and your essay reflects your thoughts well. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

Monday, which marks the start of work after the weekend, is a day full of lamentations from those who couldn't play more on the weekend. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Monday, marking the return to work after the weekend, is often filled with complaints from those who wish they had more time for leisure during the weekend. 

Originally, the desire to rest becomes more full on Mondays and gives you a feeling of pain for no reason. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Originally, the urge to rest intensifies on Mondays, giving rise to a sense of discomfort without any apparent cause. 

So I think it's difficult to increase productivity. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Therefore, I think people find it challenging to enhance productivity. 

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