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Hello,my name is Ryan. today i will tell you 'What should you bring when you visit someone at the hospital?'
In Korea, you usually only need to take pay amd sell phone when you go to the hospital.

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Thank you for this Ryan!

Hello, my name is Ryan. 
>>>  correct  
today, i will tell you 'What should you bring when you visit someone at the hospital?'
>>> OR: Today, I will tell you what I should bring when I visit someone at the hospital. 
In Korea, you usually only need to take pay amd sell phone when you go to the hospital.
>>> In Korea, you usually only need to take money and cell phone when you go to the hospital.  
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