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What can you say about the generation gap?

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Chammy. I was so glad to meet you every Tuesday, because I felt like I haven't seen you for a long time.
I really wanted to say something while we were talking about Russian service.
"Russian service is serving the meals from the plates of the employee to the plates of the guest."
You might understand what I meant. Can you fix the sentence for me? Or you can add more sentence.

What can you say about the generation gap?
The generation gap can be different mind among the 10's and 20's , 30's, 40's...
According to sudden change of time, people have to follow the new cultures.
In my case, when I was student, I am used to geting the cane from teachers for many bad habits.
And my mother also helped teachers hit me whenever I did something wrong so that I can live properly for the future.
But it is illegal and the parents don't let teachers hit their children anymore. Even they report to the police when teachers get the cane.
Everything is changing and we must admit it.

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Hello, Han! 
It is my pleasure as well to meet you at least twice a week... I must say it's better than never ~ The sentence you were asking me to rephrase was correct and understandable, so I just suggested a few sentences... In addition, I never thought that you were a naughty student before, haha! Why on earth do you have to get the teacher's cane HAHAHA~
-Chammy
Chammy. I was so glad to meet you every Tuesday, because I felt like I haven't seen you for a long time.
>>Chammy, I was so glad to meet you every Tuesday, because I felt like I hadn't seen you in a long time.
I really wanted to say something while we were talking about Russian service.
"Russian service is serving the meals from the plates of the employee to the plates of the guest."
>>Correct
>>Portioning the dishes on individual plates by the waiter is known as Russian service. ^^
OR
>>And the waiter dishes it out from the platter to the guest's plates. (^_^)
OR
>>And the server distributes food from the platter to each guest's plates. (^^,)
OR
>>And the server serves it off the platter onto each guest's plate.  :-D
You might understand what I meant. Can you fix the sentence for me? Or you can add more sentences.
>>Correct
The generation gap can be different mind among the 10's and 20's, 30's, 40's...
>>Correct
According to sudden change of time, people have to follow the new cultures.
>> Due to sudden changes in time, people have to follow the new cultures.
In my case, when I was student, I am used to geting the cane from teachers for many bad habits.
>>In my case, when I was a student, I used to get the cane from teachers as one of my bad habits.
OR
>>When I was a student, one of my bad behaviors was getting the cane from the teacher.
And my mother also helped teachers hit me whenever I did something wrong so that I can live properly for the future.
>> My mother also helped teachers hit me whenever I did something wrong so that I could live properly in the future.
But it is illegal and the parents don't let teachers hit their children anymore. Even they report to the police when teachers get the cane.
Everything is changing and we must admit it.
>> But it is unlawful, and parents no longer allow teachers to hit their children. They even report to the police when teachers use the cane to hit children. Everything is changing and we must admit it.
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