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What\'s your favorite thing about your home?

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My favorite thing about my home is playing Nintendo Swich.
Beacause the Mario Kart8 is interesting and exiting.
And Poketmon Unite is exiting and fun.
And super Kirby Hunters is fun and interesting.
These reasons are my favorite thing in my home.

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Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


My favorite thing about my home is playing Nintendo Swich.
>> The thing I love to do at home is playing Nintendo Switch.
Beacause the Mario Kart8 is interesting and exiting.
>> It's because Mario Kart8 is interesting and exciting to play.
And Poketmon Unite is exiting and fun.
And super Kirby Hunters is fun and interesting.
>> Pokemon Unite and Super Kirby Hunters are exciting and fun games, too.
These reasons are my favorite thing in my home.
>> That is my favorite thing at home.
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