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I haven't had a stove was broken yet. However, If the stove breaken the portable stove is kept at home for emergencies, so it will be used to prepare food. Another way is to go out and eat at a restaurant, or order from a mobile app.
Korea has a developed app culture so, it is convenient to deliver it to your home when you order it with a mobile app. You can choose from a wide variety of foods in the app.

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Hello Mia! Thank you for answering the homework. Filipinos also love ordering in mobile apps like Koreans. I agree that it is very convenient especially when our stoves at home are broken. ^^
-Khai
I haven't had a stove was broken yet. 
>> I haven¡¯t experienced that my stove broke.
However, If the stove breaken the portable stove is kept at home for emergencies, so it will be used to prepare food. 
>> However, if my stove breaks, we have a portable stove kept at home for emergencies. It will be used to prepare food.
Another way is to go out and eat at a restaurant, or order from a mobile app.
>> Another way is to go out and eat at a restaurant or order from a mobile app.
Korea has a developed app culture so, it is convenient to deliver it to your home when you order it with a mobile app. 

>> Korea has developed helpful apps, so it is convenient to have the food delivered to your home when you order it with a mobile app.

OR

>> Koreans developed a culture of ordering food from apps, so it is convenient to have the food delivered to your home.

You can choose from a wide variety of foods in the app.

>> CORRECT



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