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What do you think is the best benefit of digital technology?
I think. maybe, it is convenience, challenge ,
New change and development .

It have developed about our phycical life.
The Present is more light than the past.
We got a lot of convenience through our handphone and internet.
We can meet our family to live far at short time.
Because, transportation developed for short time.

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Thank you for this Sir Ko!

I think. maybe, it is convenience, challenge , New change and development .
>>>  I think it probably the convenience, challenge, new change and development.
It have developed about our phycical life.
>>>  It has developed our physical life. 
The Present is more light than the past.
>>>  The present is easier than the past. 
We got a lot of convenience through our handphone and internet.
>>> correct  
We can meet our family to live far at short time. Because, transportation developed for short time.
>>>  We can meet our family who live far at a short time because transportation has developed for a short time.
 
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