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Seoul is our capital city which we Koreans are proud of. It is one of the top metropolises in the world. It has a long history and an excellent combination with modernization and historical heritages. At the middle of the tall buildings, there are old, beautiful palaces and historic sites. Many visitors can enjoy that harmony. Seoul has the most convenient public transportation such as subways, buses and taxis. Visitors can go anywhere very quickly and easily.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
Thank you for doing your homework! It's really nice to know that you are proud of Seoul. I also always hear about how good the transportation system is in Seoul and how accessible it is. Thank you for sharing your insights about Seoul!
- T. Caitlyn 
Seoul is our capital city which we Koreans are proud of. 
>> CORRECT
It is one of the top metropolises in the world. 
>> CORRECT
It has a long history and an excellent combination with modernization and historical heritages. 
>> It has a long history and an excellent combination of modernization and historical heritage.
At the middle of the tall buildings, there are old, beautiful palaces and historic sites. 
>> In the middle of the tall buildings, there are old, beautiful palaces and historic sites.
Many visitors can enjoy that harmony. 
>> CORRECT
Seoul has the most convenient public transportation such as subways, buses and taxis. 
>> CORRECT
Visitors can go anywhere very quickly and easily.
>> CORRECT
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