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A good place to enjoy spring in Korea is where the cherry blossom festival is held, and the Gunhangje Festival in Jinhae is famous. A good place to enjoy summer is Taebaek, where there are almost no tropical nights. It is said to be the coolest city in Korea. And a good place to enjoy fall is Chuknyeongsan Mountain in Jangseong, which has beautifully colored autumn leaves. Another good place to enjoy winter is Deoksugung Palace, which is covered in snow, and the winter sea in Busan is also nice.

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Happy Monday, Eliana!
Thank you for taking the time to answer your homework and this is one of the most detailed answers that I got. Impressive!
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A good place to enjoy spring in Korea is where the cherry blossom festival is held, and the Gunhangje Festival in Jinhae is famous.
>>> CORRECT!

A good place to enjoy summer is Taebaek, where there are almost no tropical nights. It is said to be the coolest city in Korea.
>>> A good place to enjoy summer is Taebaek, where almost no tropical nights exist. It is said to be the coolest city in Korea.

A good place to enjoy fall is Chuknyeongsan Mountain in Jangseong, which has beautifully colored autumn leaves.
>>> A beautiful place to experience Fall colors is Chuknyeongsan Mountain in Jangseong.

Another good place to enjoy winter is Deoksugung Palace, which is covered in snow, and the winter sea in Busan is also nice.
>>> CORRECT!
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