무료 레벨테스트 받고 강사평가 남기면 1,OOO원 쿠폰 즉시 적립!

혹시 사이트에선 찾지 못한 궁금한 점이 있으세요?
남겨주신 이메일을 통해 답변 드리겠습니다.

문의하신 내용이 문자로 발송되오니
연락처를 남겨주세요.
업무시간 월~금 오전9시~오후6시
(점심시간 낮12시~오후1시)

영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

What is an ideal holiday for you?

작성자: 정*환
2024-01-12 1073

회원님의 영작문

Chammy.
I postponed our class last Tuesday because I left my laptop at my hotel. So I felt like it's been a long time since I talked with you.
And I thought 2 classes a week would be enough. But it is not...
I should have re-enrolled 3 times classes a week. Let me think it again after 3 months.

What is an ideal holiday for you?
I spent my holidays with my family and it is not what I wanted. Actually I like to enjoy my time by myself in some cafe.
I usually spent my holiday drawing logos and drinking coffee and reading books. My job is interested in hospitality so I have my chance to meet guests and talk. Sometime I want to be alone without talking. I like to read the books about success stories. By reading the books, I can find out what is wrong with me about bad habits, figure out the way to go for the future.
And it made me challenge the certificate of hotel management again even though I failed it 3 times.
Those are my ideal holiday.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there, Han!~
Yeah, it feels strange these days as we used to have classes 5 days a week. And we're just getting used to the new schedule~... At first, I didn't understand why you prefer spending your holidays alone but while checking it, I guess you were able to justify it. I understand the reason considering the nature of your work.^^ For now, I must say welcome back to work and happy working. 
-Chammy

Chammy.
I postponed our class last Tuesday because I left my laptop at my hotel. So I felt like it's been a long time since I talked with you.
And I thought 2 classes a week would be enough. But it is not...
I should have re-enrolled 3 times classes a week. Let me think it again after 3 months.


I spent my holidays with my family and it is not what I wanted. Actually I like to enjoy my time by myself in some cafe.
>>I spent my holidays with my family and it was not what I wanted. Actually, I like to enjoy my time by myself in some cafes
I usually spent my holiday drawing logos and drinking coffee and reading books.
>>I usually spend my holidays drawing logos, drinking coffee, and reading books.
My job is interested in hospitality so I have my chance to meet guests and talk.
>>Correct
OR
>>Since I am working in the hospitality industry, I get to meet and talk with guests.
Sometime I want to be alone without talking. I like to read the books about success stories. 
>> Sometimes I want to be alone without talking. I like to read the books about success stories. 
By reading the books, I can find out what is wrong with me about bad habits, figure out the way to go for the future.
>>By reading the books, I can find out what is wrong with me about bad habits, and figure out the way to go for the future.
And it made me challenge the certificate of hotel management again even though I failed it 3 times.Those are my ideal holidays.
>> And it challenged me to retake the hotel management certificate even though I failed it 3 times. Those are my ideal holidays. 
번호 제목 글쓴이 공개 상태 등록일 조회수
130343 Do you think backpacking is done only by those with little money? 권*진 완료 2023-08-21 1
130342 How bad is bullying in your country? 권*진 완료 2023-08-21 1
130341 Homework 김*우 완료 2023-08-21 3537
130340 What are you like when you are angry? 권*진 완료 2023-08-21 2
130339 What are the advantages of living in an apartment? 박*아 완료 2023-08-21 2080
130338 How do you feel about fusion food? Do you prefer traditional... 송*하 완료 2023-08-21 2819
130337 What mechanisms are necessary for people to go through in order... 김*경 완료 2023-08-21 1703
130336 To develop my life 최*환 완료 2023-08-21 2585
130335 What are the benefits of waking up early? 홍*기 완료 2023-08-21 2321
130334 Homework JA*UNG CHUNG 완료 2023-08-21 4201
130333 How does showing care towards others contribute to building... 정*아 완료 2023-08-21 2811
130332 Homework 신*화 완료 2023-08-21 1969
130331 Do you think the technology that we have right now is effective... 김*경 완료 2023-08-21 3263
130330 Homework 김*영 완료 2023-08-21 2313
130329 Have you ever committed a small/ petty crime when you were young? 이*주 완료 2023-08-21 2231
130328 homework 장*석 완료 2023-08-21 1999
130327 8/21 고*진 완료 2023-08-21 15
130326 Weekend activities 김*윤 완료 2023-08-21 1795
130325 Homework 정*혁 완료 2023-08-21 1865
130324 ESSAY 권*정 완료 2023-08-21 3

HOW TO USE IT?

[마이페이지 > 수업 내용 보기 > 학습 캘린더 > 영작교정 버튼 클릭]

수업 횟수만큼 영작교정 게시판이 생성되며,
지난 날짜에도 게시 할 수 있습니다.

주5회 수업 : 월 20회 이용 가능
주3회 수업 : 월 12회 이용 가능
주2회 수업 : 월 08회 이용 가능
01
교정 내용은 최대 1,000byte까지 올릴 수 있습니다.

첨부 파일은 원활한 첨삭을 위한 참고자료로 사용될 뿐,
파일에 대한 첨삭은 불가능 합니다.

업로드 가능한 첨부 파일은 최대 2mb까지이며,
첨부 할 수 있는 파일 형식은 다음과 같습니다.

문서 - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
이미지 - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
전문 분야를 제외한 회원님이 직접 작성한 글만
첨삭이 가능하며,

올려주신 글의 강사님 첨삭은 24시간 이내에
완료 되는 것을 원칙으로 하고 있습니다.
03
하루 게시 가능한 글은 3회까지 이며,
종료된 수업의 영작교정 게시판은
이용이 어려운 점 양해 부탁 드립니다.
04

와이즈에듀케이션아이(주) 사이트명: 파워잉글리쉬 대표이사 전상현
사업자등록번호: 217-81-44736 통신판매신고번호: 2014-서울도봉-0233호
서울본사: 서울시 노원구 한글비석로 245 두타빌 B동 7층 713호
대표번호 1688-8672 개인정보관리 책임자: 안희영 [powerenglish@pweng.net]